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发表于 2014-6-9 21:54:53
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1 i can not afford anything cost much 改为 i can not afford to buy anything cost much。cuz afford means having the fanancial to do something or to buy something.+ [$ u3 C& }( Y: h
2.by the end of the last December. by the end 是固定搭配 。
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! c) V2 c6 K$ s% B9 T# [3.i got the problem again.用 get 或者 have 都行。
; A) E7 h" e8 U( k9 ~. \1 R4.by the end of the last December , i got the problem again ,but i am not such someone being afraid of figuring out a crazy idea.没太看懂这句您想表达什么。' C" S2 Y2 @. q/ z8 L
第一段大概就这些小细节 ,您写得很不错 对于初学者来说,孰能生巧加油,另外 在英翻界有句话 就是十句汉译英才能出来一句英译汉 也就是多精读 多翻译 才能纠正中式思维。一点小建议,共勉。 |
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