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发表于 2014-6-9 21:54:53
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1 i can not afford anything cost much 改为 i can not afford to buy anything cost much。cuz afford means having the fanancial to do something or to buy something.
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3.i got the problem again.用 get 或者 have 都行。
' S7 t" V, d7 ]3 W, H4.by the end of the last December , i got the problem again ,but i am not such someone being afraid of figuring out a crazy idea.没太看懂这句您想表达什么。
W/ `& s: ]1 q$ Z/ R4 U第一段大概就这些小细节 ,您写得很不错 对于初学者来说,孰能生巧加油,另外 在英翻界有句话 就是十句汉译英才能出来一句英译汉 也就是多精读 多翻译 才能纠正中式思维。一点小建议,共勉。 |
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